Friday, May 04, 2007

Homecoming haiku?

My key hits the lock,
Your hair looks nice that way,
I brought dinner home.

No syllables were counted or harmed in this very late, very tired entry. Tale to follow when recovered.

1 Comments:

Blogger Anniina said...

You know, if it had one more syllable on the second line, it would be :) I wrote an almost-haiku this week, too. Sometimes it's better just to let the organic thing out than to count syllables, isn't it? Great poem.

7:14 PM  

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