Homecoming haiku?
My key hits the lock,
Your hair looks nice that way,
I brought dinner home.
No syllables were counted or harmed in this very late, very tired entry. Tale to follow when recovered.
Your hair looks nice that way,
I brought dinner home.
No syllables were counted or harmed in this very late, very tired entry. Tale to follow when recovered.
posted by The Lion Sleeps Tonight at 10:44 PM
1 Comments:
You know, if it had one more syllable on the second line, it would be :) I wrote an almost-haiku this week, too. Sometimes it's better just to let the organic thing out than to count syllables, isn't it? Great poem.
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