Friday, May 04, 2007

Homecoming haiku?

My key hits the lock,
Your hair looks nice that way,
I brought dinner home.

No syllables were counted or harmed in this very late, very tired entry. Tale to follow when recovered.


Blogger Anniina said...

You know, if it had one more syllable on the second line, it would be :) I wrote an almost-haiku this week, too. Sometimes it's better just to let the organic thing out than to count syllables, isn't it? Great poem.

7:14 PM  

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